Bella

I was living an ordinary life until something magnificent happened last night! I got a phone call from a movie director. “Hello Kaleigh, my name is Jimmy. I saw a play you performed at your school. You’re a fantastic actor. I want you to be in my movie.” Jimmy said. I immediately told him I’d love to do it, no matter how hard things get. I need to be beautiful. I’m worried he won’t like my red hair. I may dye it brown. This is a once in a life time opportunity. I’ll be famous! The camera will love me!

3 thoughts on “Bella”

  1. Hi Bella
    I really like how you used the prompt this week:)
    I also liked when you said “magnificent”instead of good
    Welldone:)

  2. Hi Bella
    I really liked how you used the prompt this week:)
    I also liked when you said “magnificent”instead of good
    Welldone:)

  3. Hi Bella! You have a nice story. I have a few friends who are really good actors, and they are in many plays outside of school. You don’t have too many adjectives that would make your story more interesting. How did Jimmy see your school play?

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